12-words story #004
He got the brightest smile, but I see the shadow behind it.
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21 Comments
Dragon Warrior
It’s really deep, and perhaps we all have been the ‘he’ at times? Smiling to hide the pain? Really great.
Jessica E. Larsen
Thanks Ms. Warrior.
I agree I also think that we’re all the same moments as him…
popsiclesociety
A smile sometimes hides lots of unknown…beautiful and profound dear Jess
Jessica E. Larsen
Thanks Ribby, your words made it more colorful
popsiclesociety
Hahaha…life is full of colours
Jim Borden
two-faced…
Jessica E. Larsen
I’m thinking more of a person hiding his tears but hmm… you make a point there. It could be taken that way too
Jim Borden
as usual, I misinterpret things…
Jessica E. Larsen
I won’t say that. You saw it from the other side… and I love that you did!
stevescountry
Short and so very real, well done Jessica!
Jessica E. Larsen
Thanks Steve,
this one was inspired by the thought that everyone who smile are happy…
stevescountry
So many times people who smile
a lot are not always happy 
. Have a wonderful day Jessica! 
Jessica E. Larsen
Same to you Steve
stevescountry
Thanks!
Fiery
Oh wonderful, sweetheart.
I know someone just like this
Jessica E. Larsen
Thanks Ms. Fiery <3
Sometimes the ones who smiles the brightest is the loneliest of all.
Fiery
Dracul Van Helsing
Very well done.
Jessica E. Larsen
Thanks Chris!
Simon
So deep
Short and deep shadow … Well done 
Have a beautiful day Jessica 
Jessica E. Larsen
Thanks Simon <3 Same to you :)